Final Revision

 Hello, it's Renato Corrales back with another blog. Today my group completed a few changes to finalize our final task. In our peer review, our peer made a few criticisms of our film. We took this as an opportunity to take this and improve our film. All of us in the group wanted to make this film as best as it could be. One critic that was commented on was the acting. Our peer said that our acting could've better to help captivate our audience better. So we decided to do just that and refilm some dialogue scenes. We refilmed the scenes of me and Isahiah on the phone right away. We attempted many takes wanting to perfect the acting. Both I and Isahiah kept in mind the emotion of sadness and frustration that our character felt. We tried to portray this best with our acting and after several attempts, we were satisfied with our new scenes. We had Conner and Finn as well as our friend look at our new footage and review it. We as a group thought the new scenes were better and also helped better show how our characters felt throughout our film. Once done revising those scenes, we decided to improve on one more aspect. One other critic said was the editing of our film could have been better. This was more towards our news report scene so we decided to fix that. We used a third-party app with our introductory news report scene and added a background of a news report. This helped give a better professional setting and a more realistic news report. We also edited this background with headlines of "Renato loses heavyweight title" to help the headline match with our story. We overall finished satisfied and happy with our new changes knowing our film is the best it can possibly be.